Skip to main content

The Willing Suspension of Disbelief or You Did WHAT Now?

A while ago, now, Maggie Stiefvater had yet another great post on Fangs, Fur & Fey about writing stories with supernatural elements, and the reactions of the characters to those supernatural elements. This is what she says:

But in urban fantasy, we ask our characters to believe in the incredible in every book. We need them to believe before the end of the book, because in most cases, the plot sort of relies on the fact that they start dealing with the supernatural crapola that's going on instead of running to see a therapist.
Once again, I totally agree with Maggie.* If a book is set in the "real world" and that "real world" is then infiltrated by, or discovered to have, various supernatural elements (be those vampires, or fey, or zombies, or whatever), the characters simultaneously need to react realistically, but also need to just accept that this is how things work now, and get to the plot already. It's a fine line. Too far on the "I don't believe this" side, and the reader gets bored or annoyed.** But if the characters are all just "oh, werewolves? Okay! Let's go to the prom!" then the verisimilitude is lost. Because real people finding out that werewolves are real? Would be a little freaked out, at least for a little while.

One of the ways to speed things up, is to have the supernatural element affect the main character. That way, the character must believe, because it's happening to her and she can feel it.

Another way is to amp the danger, which is what typically happens in zombie movies. Almost every good zombie movie (and most of the bad ones) starts with people freaking the eff out, and then getting down to the business of zombie killing. If they don't, they'll soon be getting down to the business of being zombie food.

Plus, without a little bit of skepticism, there wouldn't be any chance for the characters to get explanations of things. Without the "OMG, you're a VAMPIRE", it would be hard to have the main character understand and come to love vampires.***

But I'm ultimately with Maggie--after a brief nod to "real life" skepticism about what's going on, I want the characters to accept the fact that something freaky is going on and get to doing something about it.

~~~

* You're shocked, aren't you? I know.
** Those of you who are old and/or cool enough may remember The X-Files, wherein Agent Scully still did not believe in aliens even after she was totally impregnated by one and watched a giant spaceship rise up out of an iceberg. To coin a tired phrase: bish, please.

*** Note, of course, that if you're writing a horror story, you don't need the explanations, except of how to kill the supernatural element. In 'Salem's Lot, for example, Stephen King doesn't need to spend a lot of time explaining vampires. He just needs to have them killing some people and the other characters are like "OKAY! We get it! Vampires!" Because it's a horror novel and not an urban fantasy, vampires aren't going to be cool, or funny, or sexy. They're just going to be damn scary. And, in fact, the less explanation of something that's meant to be scary, the better.

Comments

Popular posts from this blog

Monday Miscellany

1. I've been watching old episodes of The West Wing on Bravo lately, and have come to the conclusion that I love the character of Sam Seaborn. He's smart, he's earnest, he's a good writer, and he's played by Rob Lowe. What's not to love?* 2. I just bought the cutest jacket at Ann Taylor Loft. I know you care, but it's not every day that one can find a white denim jacket with styling reminiscent of Michael Jackson and a tailored waist. I'm just saying. 3. NaNoWriMo proceeds apace. There is no way that I'm going to be able to keep writing at this pace after this month is over, but I'm on track to finish. It's an interesting project...in some ways the speed is freeing and in other ways it's extremely limited, as to make the word count I have no time to go back and revise. 4. Alien and Aliens are amazing movies. Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection ? Not so much. 5. This week's Glee characterization inconsistency watch: Rache...

Jay Takes A Stand

Moonrat, still at Editorial Ass, is making me think a lot lately. She did a recent post here about sexualized violence in print ads, and connected the dots to sexualized violence in books and other media, which got me thinking about how I treat girls and women in my books. To be clear--I'm a feminist. I believe in equal pay for equal work and reproductive choice, and the whole ball of wax. I'm not going to go into detail about all that here because, frankly, there are people out there whose blogs are dedicated to that kind of thing (like Jezebel *) and they do it way better than I ever could. But that's my political orientation, in case you care. So when I was writing The Book, it was very important to me that my female protagonist S did not fall into any of those "heroine needs saving by the hero" tropes that so many books for teenage girls do. Sure, there's something very "romantic" about the hero swooping in and rescuing the heroine, right? ...

The waiting is the hardest part

As I mentioned, I entered the Fangs, Fur & Fey contest over on their blog (there's a link in the sidebar). And the results are supposed to be posted on Monday, which when all the hook writers would find out whether they should send in pages or not. Cool, cool. But, as it turns out, some of the judges are really on their game, and have been turning in entries earlier. Which have been being posted earlier. Which means that for the last two days I've been checking the website obsessively in the hope of seeing my magic number - 121 - up there. Which it has NOT been. 122 has gone up, but not 121. I'm trying to take this as a good sign. ::fingers crossed:: The contest itself has been real eye-opener. Good hooks, bad hooks, good hooks for books I would never read in a million years, bad hooks for books that I think I would love ... it's really cool. I also love the comments that the judges are making, which are usually right, but which also point out just how mu...